As soon as it got to 00:08, I'm like "Oh my gawd" for the rest of the track. The rest of the piece I'm like "it's Samus, and a fighting mech, in a really dark part of paper Mario....... SO COOL!" Heh, it's so hard metal without being metal ( ... that would make it industrial then wouldn't it?)
A problem I have is at 02:18. It sounds too empty between 02:18-02:32. I think all it needs is another synth in unison but an octave lower maybe. It's a very short of the piece that's missing a little something, but you fix it really quick in the song. It also seems like the melody synth you have doesn't stick out in the foreground. It starts in at 00:21. Maybe if you turned down the apreggiating synth a tad and give the melody more attack it might be a little more appealing.
But man, this is still pretty sweet to listen. I can't find anything else wrong with this, and I don't want to find anything else wrong with this. The percussion and all of the sound fx are so sweet, the bass synths just works so well. Oh man the percussion groove is sweet. With all of the other music I've been listening to here, I'm used to it being twice as fast, and then you bring this along and I'm almost bashing my head into the computer with how I'm headbanging.
Much yes
-Spadezer-